The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Here, we have set of maps. The first map illustrates information of university sports center in present. However, another map spells out a future plan of sports center.
Overall, middle part of center is the same in both maps, but most attractive thing is in future both outdoor courts will be including in sports center, so, area of sports center has been in rectangle shape. Hence, they will be included more facilities in the future.
In present, shape of center is square and fewer facilities are given by the center. Reception area is facing at entrance door. Backside of the reception area, there are two inner doors in western and eastern side of 25m pool that is changing room and seating area. Gym is located in northern side of 25m pool and pool is in middle of a center. This all facilities are as it is in future, but gym area will be bigger in the future. Outside of center, there are two outdoor courts is available and located in eastern and western side of center, however, in the future it will added in sports center to establishing new facilities.
In addition, leisure pool will add in future plan at a northwestern side of center. In the future, sports shop and café will be set off at eastern and western side of entrance door. Two more changing room will establish at southeastern and southwestern side of center. New dancing studios will added in northeastern side of center, and sports hall will set off beside of seating area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Here, we have set of maps. The first map...
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...ls out a future plan of sports center. Overall, middle part of center is the sa...
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...ncluded more facilities in the future. In present, shape of center is square an...
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...enter. This all facilities are as it is in future, but gym area will be bigger in the fut...
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... center, however, in the future it will added in sports center to establishing new fa...
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...center to establishing new facilities. In addition, leisure pool will add in fu...
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...ide of center. New dancing studios will added in northeastern side of center, and spo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67704280156 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50507516769 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439688715953 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8828077026 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224767793566 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920491458559 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639279629699 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164352607907 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273760804974 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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