The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The glance at the given map shows the plot of a college sports centre. Now, and after reconstruction in the future.
First and foremost, in a present era university sports center not look as much good there is a west side and east side outdoor courts is located. However in a south side main enterance gate is first come reception area. Apart from changing room is located on west side and seating area in east side. But in the middle of the west and east there is a 25 meter 2001. Further more in north side above pool there is seen uncover gym.
Secondly, In a suture plans the university sport centre it's will be look like a adorable. In addition to, there will be a brad new facilities such as 2 dance studio in east side and south side one cafe and one changing room, and the mai entrance in the bottom of fight corner. As well as the pool, the changing room, the seating and the reception, which are located in the middle of building area, will be unchanged except for the gym. whle is going to a bigger. while as the upgrided layout, the outdoor court will be demulished and a spaciues tersure poo is going to be built in the westren side of sport sentre.
Over all trend, it can be clearly seen that the redeveloped sports centre will include more various facilities. Moreover the building area will be expeeded considerably.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...uture plans the university sport centre its will be look like a adorable. In additi...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...e a brad new facilities such as 2 dance studio in east side and south side one cafe an...
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Suggestion: Whle
..., will be unchanged except for the gym. whle is going to a bigger. while as the upg...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: While
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e will include more various facilities. Moreover the building area will be expeeded cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, except for, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48979591837 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35791223419 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3863544326 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5714285714 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194050836829 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713010333056 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828741259762 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125586903209 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518902109479 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.