The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plans illustrate the current layout of a university sports complex and proposals for its future renovation. Overall, the university sports center is projected to become much bigger with new recreational facilities available to students.
At present, behind the reception area is a 25-meter indoor pool flanked by a changing room and a seating area, while a gym is at the rear of the building. In addition, there are two separate outdoor courts adjacent to the main building on the east and west side.
With regard to the future plans, the outdoor courts are expected to be removed to make room for more new facilities whereas the building is planned to be upgraded to a self-contained sports complex. For example, the outdoor courts in the west wing will be replaced with a large leisure pool with a new changing room. Likewise, the outdoors courts in the east wing will be demolished to make way for a proposed sports hall, two dance studios, and another new changing room. In addition, there will be a sports shop and a café next to the two newly-built changing rooms while the original gym is slated to be expanded. Although the sports center will undergo dramatic changes, the current pool with the seating area and changing room on either side are going to remain as it is now.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, whereas, while, for example, in addition, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78475336323 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60894841577 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493273542601 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6905296464 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126682684523 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644499898898 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531847070153 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917274740921 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716818550789 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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