The maps illustrate the design in the sports centre of university before and after reconstruction.
It can be clearly seen that both outdoor courts will be dismantled as well as the sports centre will expand more westerly and easterly. Overall, the present facilities unchanged.
As for the current design, it is a reception at the entrance as well as there is a changing room on the left-hand door and user is available to get in the 25 meters swimming pool via the door inside the changing room. Seating post on the right-hand door as well as Gym room places on the north of the building. As far as outdoor courts, which set on both sides of the centre.
In future designs, the indoor building will expand instead of the outdoor courts. At the reception, sport shop and cafe will open on the left and right corner. The amount of changing room will be triple, in addition to the original, the others will plan on the corner next to the sports shop and cafe, independently. The leisure pool is possible for swimming in the future and it will establish on the west. Sports hall and dance studio cannot be overlooked as well, these facilities will add to the east of the centre. Lastly, the size of the Gym room will be bigger than before the renovation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... both outdoor courts will be dismantled as well as the sports centre will expand more west...
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Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ers will plan on the corner next to the sports shop and cafe, independently. The leisu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, look, well, as for, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59111111111 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50648541504 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.08664498 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123314301635 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501196109547 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494589209635 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917109358295 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592045492584 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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