The two diagrams compare the plan in the sports centre of university after reconstruction.
It can be clearly seen that outdoor courts will be dismantled and the sports centre will expand more westerly and easterly. Overall, the present facilities will not change except the gym room will see a growing.
Look precisely to the current map, there is a reception behind the entrance as well as a changing room on the left-hand door and the user is available to get in the 25 meters swimming pool via the door inside the changing room. Also, seating set on the right-hand door as well as Gym room is placed on the north of the building. As far as outdoor courts, which set on both sides of the centre.
In future, there are some new facilities in the centre, after entering the entrance, people may turn left to the sports shop as well as turn right to have a coffee in cafe. And then, two changing rooms will place on the left and right corner independently. Moreover, leisure pool is possible in the future as well as established on the west, furthermore, there will be a sports hall next to the seating. Lastly, on the east, there will be two dance studios.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...which set on both sides of the centre. In future, there are some new facilities in the c...
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Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... the west, furthermore, there will be a sports hall next to the seating. Lastly, on th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...east, there will be two dance studios.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58373205742 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52082737154 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.910215085 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126778596955 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575860793012 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596007173297 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104686462135 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723651108682 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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