The presented diagram demonstrates the information about the layout of a university's sports centre now , and after its redevelopment.
Initially, from the given illustration, it can be seen that there was 25m long pool in the centre where seating and changing room were situated in the east and west side of pool. And reception was placed at the entrance of sports centre before its reconstruction. Similarly, two large outdoors were kept to the east and west side of the centre and gym was located just above the pool.
Finally, after the renovation of sports centre, the whole area was expanded with various facilities. Changing room, seating, gym and pool were in the same place whereas leisure pool and sports hall were built by replacing outdoors courts. Two dance studio were constructed just east to the sports hall. Moreover, another two changing room were developed at the two corner which were below the leisure room and dance studio. Cafe and sports shop were added for the benefited of visitors.
To conclude, after the renovation of sports centre, it was dramatically changed with lots of opportunities and facilities in the favour of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, similarly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0942408377 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7204805715 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2964587459 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126515092984 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659563428402 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801221298465 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117030778968 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106060910715 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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