The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Essay topics:

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The maps depict the information about the present layout plan of a sports complex of a university and also elucidate the same after doing some advancements in future.
Overall, the area of the sports centre will be enlarged with the introduction of two dance studios and replacement of both outdoor courts by leisure pool and sports hall on each side.
It is clearly seen from the illustrations, 25m pool is in the heart of the sports centre which will be remained on the same location in future along with changing room on its west side and seating facility on the east side. In addition, gym in the north direction of the sports centre will be extended towards north east direction. However, both the outdoor courts ( one is on the west side and another one is on the east side of the centre ) will be replaced with the construction of a leisure pool in West direction and sports hall in East direction of the university's sports area.
It is vivid from the same illustration, on the south west and south east corners of the sports centre, two changing rooms are planned to be construed in future after redevelopment. Moreover, a new sports Shop can be seen in the future layout plan as it will be built next to the leisure pool's changing room and a café will be introduced in south eastern side of the sports centre near another changing room . Further, reception will be remained unchanged in future , as it is on the southern side of the sports complex.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ection. However, both the outdoor courts one is on the west side and another one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62162162162 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58362578734 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42471042471 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.293603794 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.625 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235941684287 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127291988712 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336210874312 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162370485627 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288915124263 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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