The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the design of a modern university's sports centre and the blueprint for its future renovation programme. Overall, the main building located at the centre of the picture will be expanded, and the two outdoor courts will also be removed for the expansion of the facilities.
Nowadays, the sports centre building contains a 25-meter swimming pool, surrounded by the gym, seating, and changing rooms. The entrance of it faces south. Once students enter the building, they can find reception desks right in front of them and then enjoy the abovementioned indoor activities. On both the east side and the west side of the building exist outdoor courts which can be used for other types of exercises.
After the refurbishment, it is projected that the sports centre will no longer provide outdoor facilities. The east outdoor courts will be replaced by a leisure pool while the west ones will be demolished for the sports hall and two dance studios. The centre of the original building, namely the 25-meter pool will remain unchanged, so will the changing rooms and seating. On the other hand, the gym will be expanded to connect the dance studios, and several store and facilities will be added, including a sports shop, a café, and two new changing rooms, all of which will be established in the south of the building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...he west ones will be demolished for the sports hall and two dance studios. The centre ...
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Line 9, column 452, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun store seems to be countable; consider using: 'several stores'.
Suggestion: several stores
...anded to connect the dance studios, and several store and facilities will be added, including...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98230088496 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63474676508 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3408382926 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132071783204 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060624597934 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452737070176 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926152535509 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457245018697 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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