The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provide information about the comparison between Grange Park in 1920 and the same park now.
Overall, it can be seen that the Park of Grange underwent significant changes over the period shown.
Looking at the maps in more detail, it is evident that there were two entrances of park, from Arnold Avenue and from Eldon Street. These entrances remained unchanged over the period shown. There were seats and a stage for musicians in the west of the Grange Park in 1920, then, they were removed and an Amphitheatre was built for concerts. Also, there were two rose gardens which are located separately in the southwest of the park and the northwest of the park in 1920. The rose garden which is located in the southwest of the park was demolished and the other rose garden remained the same over the period shown. There were seats between rose gardens and entrances but they were removed.
Turning to the remainin information, it is clear that there were a fountain in the centre of the park but this was removed and a square shaped rose garden with four seats
its around was built. In the northeast of the park, there were a rose garden and a pond for water plants. They were removed, a cafe and a Children's play area were built in the same place. There were a glasshouse and seats in the southeast of the park but they were demolished, a water feature was maden. Park facilities were improved, an underground car park which has a entrance from southeast to the park was built.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 7.0 343% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64905660377 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35216964294 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422641509434 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4432624355 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170402568836 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084398920763 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074217584909 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127669374535 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837796038079 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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