The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Southwest airport is facing a process of redevelopment which will be completed next year. Construction plans illustrating the redevelopment show that, in general, the airport will be greatly enlarged with more functions and features added.
Firstly, as presented by the plan, the size of the departure building would be three times as large as the current site. Three connected blocks for departure would each possess six departure gates, increasing the current number of gates from eight to eighteen. Concurrently, a sky train line which links the entrance of the departure hall and the joint of the three departure branches would be constructed to replace the current walkway. This could effectively facilitate passengers and save time.
Turning to the departure and arrival area, there is only a check-in and a cafe in the current airport, with no services operating in the arrivals’ hall. After the redevelopment, ATM machines, car-hiring services, bag-dropping services and an additional cafe would be located in the two halls. The new bag-dropping service could make it more convenient for travelers to get around in the airport, hands-free. Additionally, new shops would be opened on the pathway to the departure gates, allowing people to purchase items before leaving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Southwest airport is facing a process of redevelopment whi...
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Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.435 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99946245184 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8018867365 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.7 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125382106617 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557668345715 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672230800129 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105674914984 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939157078685 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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