the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The given maps illustrate the reconstruction of an airport now and the following year. Obviously, it is clear to see that the airport site will be expanded and added more amenities and facilities to meet the needs of customers.
While the current airport has solely one corridor which limits the number of eight gates, it will be reconstructed in Y-shape, in which the gates are going to be added up to 18 doors. One significant change in the planned corridor is that instead of the walkway, it is more convenient for customers to use the sky train.
Apart from expanding the airport, there are many amenities added as well. In the departure area, for example, a bag drop area will be created and take the place of the recent coffee shop. And in the same way, some shops are also being added before customers go out from the security section. Furthermore, the customer service will be operated more in the arrival field compared to a current empty area, such as cafe, ATM, car hiring service which are planning to take the right side of the airport site. Addinally, more doors will also be added to facilitate the movement of guests in both the departure and arrival sections.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70531400966 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52457870371 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8837308938 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16015158641 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739680551287 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628468526623 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129417943349 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718784768341 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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