The 2 plans depict the difference between a room for 1 student and a room for 2 at a university in Australia.
Briefly, the room for two people has much more useful facilities and larger space for living and studying compared to the single one. Therefore, the renting fee of a room for 1 person is lower than the double room's.
A single student room has a length of 6 metres with a width of 2,5 metres. Inside this room, there is a large bathroom in the left-hand corner, next to it is a study desk which is put near a bed. On the opposite side of the bathroom, there is a microwave, a stove, a sink and television. For these facilities, it costs a person 200 dollars per week to rent this room.
Turning to a double student room, except for the same facilities the single room contains, this room is larger and more equipped with other devices. First, near the bathroom, there is a bookshelf, and on the opposite side, there are 2 cupboards which divide 2 private spaces including a bed and a study desk. Next t the cupboard is a round table and 2 chairs. In the right-hand corner, a microwave, a sink, a stove and a TV still exist with a different arrangement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, if, so, still, therefore, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34862385321 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60514921985 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518348623853 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.93847391 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407861134566 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153426294875 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150963704272 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300252999635 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122648835448 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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