The 2 plans depict the difference between a room for 1 student and a room for 2 at a university in Australia.
Briefly, the room for two people has much more useful facilities and larger space for living and studying compared to the single one. Therefore, the renting fee of a room for 1 person is lower than the double room's.
A single student room has a length of 6 metres with a width of 2,5 metres. Inside this room, there is a large bathroom in the left-hand corner, next to it is a study desk which is put near a bed. On the opposite side of the bathroom, there is a microwave, a stove, a sink and television. For these facilities, it costs a person 200 dollars per week to rent this room.
Turning to a double student room, except for the same facilities the single room contains, this room is larger and more equipped with other devices. First, near the bathroom, there is a bookshelf, and on the opposite side, there are 2 cupboards which divide 2 private spaces including a bed and a study desk. Next t the cupboard is a round table and 2 chairs. In the right-hand corner, a microwave, a sink, a stove and a TV still exist with a different arrangement. For more sufficient facilities, this room costs 350 dollars a week to rent, 150 dollars more than a single one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, if, so, still, therefore, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36974789916 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59908508398 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491596638655 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6322270384 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398211272927 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152035594129 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144610319621 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309428746007 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113550267949 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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