The plans show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans demonstrate the layout of a university sports centre before and after renovation.
Overall, some expansions would be done to add up new areas for indoor uses . While some parts of inner layouts would keep unchanged, several places would be removed by new functional facilities in the future.
Firstly, outdoor courts set on two sides would be replaced by a leisure pool and a new sports hall, while the 25m-pool in the centre and it surrounding facilities would remain the same except for the gym. The gym would be extended to connect with newly created dance studios, along with which there would be a changing room on the right corner. Next to the changing room, a smaller cafe would be also built there.
On the left corner, there would be another changing room erected there, where a little sports shop would be made nearby. The space before entering the reception would be enlarged around threefold the one before. Finally, more alleys would be made to get through different areas inside the sports centre.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...done to add up new areas for indoor uses . While some parts of inner layouts would...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew functional facilities in the future. Firstly, outdoor courts set on two sides...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...be replaced by a leisure pool and a new sports hall, while the 25m-pool in the centre ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, while, as for, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95402298851 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35373086388 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.743001558 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0686073729122 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466051092192 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831161895619 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088608498842 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10862023755 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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