production of matchsticks
The diagram illustrates the steps and equipments required in the production of match sticks. Overall production of matches is an extensive process involving stages such as chopping, drying, and dipping into various chemical substances. Finally, after the tedious process matches are sent into the packaging area for deployment.
First and foremost, the wooden logs are peeled and veneered by rotating them continuously. A chopper then chops these strips of wood into small sticks which are submerged in ammonium phosphate tank for further processes. While the sticks are rotating in a dryer, they are also sent into a hopper. For transporting sticks further into a storage area via metal duct, a powerful blower is often used. From the storage area, the match sticks enter the most fundamental part of the production process.
The matches are transported on the perforated steel belt to an inserter which arranges the sticks in a systematic format for the chemical processes. They undergo three major dippings, that is in the paraffin wax tank, based chemicals tank, and tip chemicals tank, and again sent to the drying area. In the last stage of production, the match sticks are ready to be deployed for sale after they undergo packaging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18905472637 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65692137768 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.021313229 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.069442150566 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347788299958 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576271889841 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556805452794 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508567318838 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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