The line graph demonstrates the percentage of audience for the radio and television in the UK during the months October to December in the year 1992. According to the legends TV percentage is shown by segmented line and radio by dotted line.
Overall, throughout the period the percentage of people watching TV is higher than that of Radio audience. While most people prefer to listen radio in the mornings where as TV mostly watched in the nights .
If we first glance the percentage of TV audience around 3% at 6Am and there is a gradual increase to 8% at 8am then moderately decreased to 6% at midday, after that the percentage of TV audience dramatically increased to peak 48% at 8pm with a gentle drop between 2pm and 4pm from that point onwards the rate of TV audience decreased to its minimum around 1% at 4am before reclimbing to 3% at 6am in the next morning.
On the other hand around 7% people listened to radio in the morning at 6am and suddenly increased to peak around 29% at 8am and then it started to decrease throught the day untill it came to the lowest point around 2% at 6pm .before increasing to 7% at 6am next morning
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... prefer to listen radio in the mornings where as TV mostly watched in the nights . If...
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Suggestion: .
...where as TV mostly watched in the nights . If we first glance the percentage of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst glance the percentage of TV audience around 3% at 6Am and there is a gradual ...
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Suggestion: .
...ame to the lowest point around 2% at 6pm .before increasing to 7% at 6am next morn...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore increasing to 7% at 6am next morning
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5616815578 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.047142856 43.030603864 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195919113355 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13560828962 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187518482195 0.0843802449381 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137372773133 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148157642672 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.