recharge below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of gold summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts illustrates the amount of water in various usages in North America, South America, Europe, Africa Central, Asia and Southeast Asia.
Overall, it can be seen that majority of Water used in Central Asia for agriculture purpose and followed by Africa.Industrial consumption is more in Europe compared to the other.
In agriculture use, the Central Asia stands 88 percentage and rather than other purposes, after the Africa stands after the Central Asia with 84 percentage. Industrial usage with less in Eastern area compared to the Western, Europe had exert 53% overall. domestic purpose are quite higher than all in South America about 19 percentage.
The Eastern areas are more Utilize the water for agriculture than Western areas. Industrial uses more in UK and North America and the other consumes low in all locations, respectively.
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| 2019-05-12 | Bhanu Kishore | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31617647059 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80484589009 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5032847278 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103668029534 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549702266619 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356853668886 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718925309839 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032479050806 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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