The report reveals the volume of world population growth in millions people from the period of nineteen century to twenty one century, while the bar graph predicts the amount of population increases for developed and developing countries in the next 25 years.
It can be clearly seen that the number of people on 1800 was 1000 million person with a slightly increases to year of 1960 recorded 2500 million person. Also, after this date the increasing took a sharp level the the peak point on 2050 of up 8000 million, then it backs to decrease to about 6000 million on the end of period.
It also can be obviously clear that the number of people in developing countries have a gradually increases started from 2200 million person on 2015 with amount of 1800 million plus on 2040, but the developed countries have no change overall the comparison period.
Overall, the highest number of people will be up to 8000 million on the year of 2050. In addition to the developed country will not receive any increases through the next 25 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ions people from the period of nineteen century to twenty one century, while the bar gr...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-one
... from the period of nineteen century to twenty one century, while the bar graph predicts t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... date the increasing took a sharp level the the peak point on 2050 of up 8000 million, ...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... date the increasing took a sharp level the the peak point on 2050 of up 8000 million, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny increases through the next 25 years.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7679558011 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40382924578 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8048962525 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840889266472 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446257121342 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997861258765 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669385682014 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115941001111 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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