The sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

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The sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

The tabel given bellow illustrates the trade obtained by a coffee shop in an agency office on a average weekday. It can be seen that the biggest amount of food sold was pastries and tea saw minimally on a typical weekday sales. All of that were fluctuate sales in a weekday of 4 periods, morning (7.30-10.30), afternoon (10.30-2.30), evening (2.30-5.30) and night (5.30-8.30).

Regarding to the data, the sales registered a period of volatile in the morning to the afternoon. 275 pastries reach a peak sold. Followed sales of 200 sandwich in diverge team. Whereas drink, two kinds of those were significant decreased. Tea sales reduce 60 from 100 in the morning to 50 in the afternoon. And main menu (the coffee) was higher sales in the morning reach 265 but declined minimally around 10, from 265 to 185 at noon

In the other hand, the trade made by a coffee shop refered a fluctuation sales in the afternoon then reach in the night. Sandwich's had an enormous dipped from 250 totally sales at the time before to 150 amount sales in the afternoon till night. Those were similarity decreased totally of sales in pastries sales, from 370 in half day before to 230 in the evening until night. Opposite of with drinks sales in the evening until the night saw gradually growth. There was a step increase of 55 for coffee, from 145 to 200 and tea sold grew steeply from 35 to 75

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...by a coffee shop in an agency office on a average weekday. It can be seen that th...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sandwich' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sandwiches'.
Suggestion: sandwiches
...each a peak sold. Followed sales of 200 sandwich in diverge team. Whereas drink, two kin...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58775510204 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47147491488 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534693877551 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3206997402 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248625937569 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816831891803 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832994001547 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154032214002 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353540921436 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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