Should a child be allowed to have full access to technology before the age
of five ? Develop a thesis statement about some aspect of an age limit for
technology use and support it in your agrument essay
many people believe that children under the age of five should not be allowed to have full access to technology. However, there are many reasons about children should or should not use technology based on what purpose of using technology for. For children under the age of five, the most important thing is to develop communication skills. but if young children focus on technology devices so much, they will ignore everything around them. Consequently, children do not get along well with peers, they do not want to talk, play with others and live in a watertight compartment. Besides that, technology devices cause a lack of information in thinking in young children. When young children use technology without their parent's control, they are free to access what they want, even the bad ones which influence to child's thinking. For example, young children access the internet and get information but they are not enough age to instinct the differences between right and wrong. so they can misunderstand about problems which they see on the internet through the technology devices. Last but not least, technology is a drug addiction to young children. this may lead to many problems such as sleep deprivation, or even lack of concentration on thinking. On the other hand, technology devices have some positive effects on children. By using many diverse ways, technology devices attract children to become more interested in education and it is very useful for them in the future. In conclusion, children under the age of five should have time limits of using technology and be under the control of parents. if technology is used for the correct purpose, this will be a useful device for young children to develop themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06315789474 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72808766283 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8675257589 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314169381329 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128449501425 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091147160669 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314169381329 0.15604864568 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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