silk cloth
The provided diagrams give information about life cycle of the silkworm and the steps involved in producing silk cloth.
It is clear that the production consists of two main separate processes. It starts from nurturing silkworm in order to collect the main material to the eventual raw silk product.
At the first diagram, the silkworm begin their life cycle by laying their eggs on the mulberry leaf. In following 10 days, these eggs will hatch and the silkworm larva appear which use the rich nutrients in the mulberry leaf to grow up. After 4-6 weeks, the larva continue to grow and create the silk thread around their body. They usually take 3-8 days to accomplish it which is called cocoon where they lie inside in a particular period of 16 days. Then, the larva become the moth and get out of the cocoon.
The next step in producing silk cloth is the techniques of treating the cocoon in order to generate the usable silk. Firstly, after collecting all the number of cocoons, they are classified and chosen according to their quality. The process continues with chosen cocoons boiled in the hot water. Next, the cooked cocoons are unwinded in a single yard with a length of 300-900m. Three yards are twisted after that to make a bigger and stronger yards which are dyed and weaved to make the raw silk product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...cocoons, they are classified and chosen according to their quality. The process continues...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74891774892 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28258837807 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.824555976 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3846153846 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238728829346 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830419291504 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133697179317 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161152748508 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100437462432 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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