In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Whole world is now more oriented towards successful career and a well high profile lifestyle. Many parents dream that their offspring will achieve more success in life, even more amount than their achievements. In order to fulfil these dream parents advice their children to do hard work so they can achieve anything.
First of all, advantages of this advice given by parents are they form a dedication in their offspring's mind to have a meaningful lifestyle on their own. In many cultures children often became interested in what their parents are doing and how hard they work in order to live a wonderful life. Due to the struggles parents had to raise them seen by children and advices given by parents, children often do hard work to achieve theirs and their parents goals and also get success in life and make their parents proud. Many people have good knowledge and skills due to hard work they had done in school or college level suggested by their parents.
Second of all, there are some disadvantages also appeared by these advices. After listening to parents many children do hard work and get success in life, however some children has to face failure and disappointments in some level of their lives. These disappointments lead some children to depression stage. Some children feel that they had let down their parents, even though they worked hard. These all thoughts will affect children's mind and make them question their abilities and increase their self doubt.
In moral of this essay, parents should advice their offspring to do hard work, however not to force them or put pressure on them to be successful and achieve their goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind having'.
Suggestion: mind having
...y form a dedication in their offsprings mind to have a meaningful lifestyle on their own. In...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
... In moral of this essay, parents should advice their offspring to do hard work, howeve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44884135452 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496428571429 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0784340394 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253485342422 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120063918839 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805778693996 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161812358391 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733341333067 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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