Some people believe that the influence that television exerts over society is largely detrimental and are calling for it to be more strictly controlled. Should television be more tightly controlled to protect society and, id so, how? Or should it have even fewer restrictions placed on it.
"every coin has it is two faces" similarly this topic is also having them too. But it depends on society to which face they are conscious about.
As human race is developing with the passage of time. The technologies are also evolving day by day, And one of the greatest gift of this technology is given by Charles Francis Jenkins which is called television, it is the invensation which has stunned the world, but it is increasing influence on human life is being a topic on which we have to worried about.Children in their childhood their minds aur productive they grab the things easily, only children should be taken care of and should be look after by parents what their chod is watching on television.
Apart from that television is most outstanding invensation of the era. It has changed the point of view of people regarding the society. It is acting as interpretor, and helping us to understand what is going around the world, it is keeping us updated than by pushing a button a person come to know about the world. It is helping aur government in having a detailed summary of various events, what is the need of their public teri demands. Tv is most upgrade medium to advertise or to communicate with the people all around the world.
In conclusion, television seems to having more positive faces than negative for the society, and I acquiesce than in my opinion television should be having few restrictions.
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- Some people believe that the influence that television exerts over society is largely detrimental and are calling for it to be more strictly controlled Should television be more tightly controlled to protect society and id so how Or should it have even fe 64
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'so', 'apart from', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21978021978 0.268076937826 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.223443223443 0.116061578633 193% => Less verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.0512820512821 0.0759168565197 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040293040293 0.0366838410393 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0732600732601 0.0131127313244 559% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124542124542 0.155750635184 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0915750915751 0.0379272487307 241% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77299474755 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025641025641 0.0210936926555 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0879120879121 0.0948980150116 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010989010989 0.00437022459523 251% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025641025641 0.00967000014798 265% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1430.0 1161.00487805 123% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.9 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76612903226 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334677419355 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241935483871 0.247514529752 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157258064516 0.171178102325 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116935483871 0.112407865282 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77299474755 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 58.6315307433 49.3433353143 119% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8 23.0094962315 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 128.603110382 42.9750493124 299% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 135.714022679 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 23.0094962315 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 48.9935483871 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.29347826087 2.94281807926 44% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321768021914 0.418131533498 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990230839563 0.181151798455 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0632496667138 0.0850326197045 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64029853313 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1918034429 0.157042692854 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138358810616 0.228904883108 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637587988326 0.108899403657 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298162368757 0.367819155151 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.14299230701 0.0812612215331 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208360291866 0.316326947829 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425432972142 0.0921553760075 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.