There comes a point where it is infinitely preferable to accept the bitter reality. In other words, it is not invariably possible to turn a negative situation into positive due to certain limitations and the absence of room for improvement. For instance, there is little that can be done for poorer nations around the world because of their economic stagnation and limited sources of income. However, prolonged exposure to traumatic conditions may frustrate the affected, therefore, motivating them to strive for excellence is absolutely necessary.
Every human in this world goes through a difficult patch at some point in their life. While it is commonly believed that the acceptance of unwanted circumstances is pragmatic, others hold the view that striving for the betterment is always a preferable alternative. I consider that long-term acceptance of something challenging in life and not thriving for progression is absolutely detrimental for individuals.
There is no doubt that investing efforts to progress and improvise life has several perks. Firstly, it makes the people will power stronger and provides them a sense of purpose particularly youngsters, who are far more vulnerable to face negative situations such as bullying, limited financial resources, work pressure, job instability. If we take a look at biographies of top leaders of the world, fascinatingly, all of them have had experienced failures but they managed to succeed and excelled through hard work and perseverance. In addition, having a pool of people who aspire to work toward betterment benefits the economy and their efforts are reflected in the overall progress of the country.
To conclude, having a progressive mindset, even if there are bleak chances of success, is tremendously important for the individual as well as economical growth. A society in which everyone was optimistic would certainly be healthier, more prosperous and more peaceful.
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- Some people say that in all levels of education,from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.Do you agree or disagree? 89
- You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letterDescribe the situationExplain why you cannot continue your course at this timeSa 78
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...vating them to strive for excellence is absolutely necessary. Every human in this world goes throug...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...important for the individual as well as economical growth. A society in which everyone was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45514950166 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10239951128 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 106.607317073 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63122923588 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1060551702 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828237571209 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278037127369 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372587299067 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454321811373 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374286518727 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 40.7170731707 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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