Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The environmental issues are raising now-a-days at greater pace. Although a section of people argue that the main issue of environment of our current time is the extinction of a few specific plants and animals, the other section of people believe that there are several other important environmental issues. This essay will discuss why loss of some species and plants is one of important environmental problem, but why other environmental problems are the most important.
Plants and animals are the basic structure of our environment. Due to increase in environmental issues like pollution, deforestation cause several problem in the environment, and plants and animals are directly affected by these changes. While issues related to extinction of some plants and animals may lead us root cause of few environmental issues, but analyzing effect on only few species will not solve our overall environment problems.
Environmental problems have several variables, and each problem has some specific reason and specific solution to tackle it. For instance, the deforestation issue may affect some particular animals, but the effect much larger than this. A forest acts as a carbon and heat sink, which maintains the temperature of the entire globe. Thus, deforestation will not only affect animal but also affect human at large. Similarly, industrial waste treatment is another issue that need serious attention. If untreated industrial wastes dispose in river, they will definitely harm fishes and other organism live in water. But, this poisonous water if use for drinking purposes and harvesting, it will be more dangerous to all species who are consuming this dirty water. Thus, there are several reasons of environmental problems that need more attention and one of effect of these reasons is to loss of plants and animals.
To recapitulate, can you summarize major environmental issue to loss of few plants and animals? The answer is a definite no. Although few people believe that loss of plants and animals are the major effect of environmental issue, I believe these are just outcome of other sever environmental issues like deforestation and water pollution, which need utmost attention presently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
...ues like pollution, deforestation cause several problem in the environment, and plants and anim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 3.97073170732 504% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40057636888 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94170396837 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487031700288 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 283.868780488 211% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3035444936 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336252905134 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111731939878 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939722864786 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233432479488 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853101645609 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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