Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people are so busy with machinery life and usually, they assume they are so lucky that they have a chance for sending their kids to the school; not only can they busy during participating in the school; but also, kids are able to learn many things in this educational system. But the reality is a little different about this idea. In fact, Parents play an imperative role in teaching them different factors of morality due to being a positive member of the society. On the other hand, some people discuss that parental educating is a true key to lead children with a good attitude through societies.
Firstly, when the children born; generally, their first mentors are their parents, they learn everything from them; moreover, most of the time kids mention to their parent's reactions as a role model and imitate them naturally. Secondly, parents spend more time with their kids so they can teach them how to behave in every situation; for instance, when the kids show unreasonable irrational behavior through their friendships, parents are able to advise them and talk about their experience and inform them about disadvantages so gradually kids learn how to react positively which has many benefits for them in their future lives.
In conclusion, we cannot ignore the role of the schools and an educational place but still, the parents have more important duty in teaching appropriate manners to their children in communicate with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nefits for them in their future lives. In conclusion, we cannot ignore the role...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03319502075 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59746397424 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.279185667 43.030603864 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.285714286 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8571428571 5.23603664747 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176397444395 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964460256888 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478605927597 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1340085238 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516739752441 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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