Some people think that teenagers should do some unpaid work in the local community. Some people believe that it benefit both young people and society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that underage people need to do work in local community at free of cost, while other believes it will be far beneficial for adolescents along with society. In my opinion, for the betterment of society it is the responsibility of government to handle these issues instead of put responsibility on teenager's shoulder.
This paragraph will discuss the disadvantages of teenager's influence as a worker in society that eventually will not be for them. It has seen many times in several countries that government has engaged underage people in different works owing to less concentration or high illiteracy rate of the country's people that eventually would devastate the future of and country. Furthermore, in many countries people start works since very early age owing to inadequacy of money and food for instance, Indonesia, Malyshiya, Kenya, Bhutan and many others. Apart from this serious issue, many adepts assert that a country can never get success if children are working to support their society or government by working. In a broader view, underage children are the most valuable asset of any country that ultimately will give far beneficial if they would be grinned in a proper way.
Moreover, In order to streamline the situation of the country government should take stern steps to implement different kind of procedures pertaining to education for de-escalating illiteracy rate of the country. Many intellectual people concerned that in order to curb the tendency of society government need to work hard to spread education systems among the country for the betterment and save the future of country, meanwhile, government ought to focus on those parents as well who do does not have enough abilities to brought up their children in better way.
In conclusion, Teenagers are not responsible to do unpaid work whereas, government is responsible to answer of every inhabitant of a country whether it is good or bed. Therefore, Government should form the criteria to look into these matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...far beneficial if they would be grinned in a proper way. Moreover, In order to streamline th...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he criteria to look into these matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 965.302439024 177% => OK
No of words: 328.0 196.424390244 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20731707317 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91047258776 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545731707317 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 283.868780488 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4680374315 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.272727273 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8181818182 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199310356167 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755583204967 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733289758813 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129946427466 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627323979029 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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