The table compares three roads, Harper lane, Great york way and Long- lane in terms of the number of vehicles on these roads over a period of ten years from 1993 to 2002.
Overall, it can be seen that vehicles on the all the three roads increased over the period. However, the quantity of vehicle on Long- lane roads shows a dramatic increase, when compared to other two roads.
Harper lane and Great york way roads have a similar trend in the rise of the number of vehicles. In 1993, the number of vehicles on Harper road was 83. Between 1993 and 1998 it increased at a faster rate and reached a peak at 915 in the year of 1998. From 1999 onwards it fell dramatically and reached a figure of 193 at the end of the period. Similarly, vehicles count on Great york way also rose up and touched a peak figure 911 in the year of 911. But this figure dropped nominally and reached 900 in the year of 2002.
when turning to the figures of Long- line road, the number of vehicles went up significantly during the period, without any fluctuation. In the middle of the period, in 1997, it hit 638 from 400 in 1993. And there was a dramatic increase between 1997 and 2002 and reached 1400 at the end of the period. The vehicles in this roads increased more than three -fold during the period, which is far higher than the other two.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34939759036 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19016571465 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477911646586 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.114634146341 1745% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.119220355 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3076923077 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187902344158 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732092105469 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778154580936 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152030253808 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789034549599 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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