The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Essay topics:

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The tabular data has information about number of male,female employees and the total number of factories in England and Wales during 1851 to 1901.

Initially the factory are very less but the working employers count at its peak value, on average each factory has about 2000 employees. Gradually the factories count keep on increasing on the other side employees count are decreasing further. Employee counts are greatly reduced from lakhs too few thousands.

Firstly, in year 1851, the total employers has the most significant peak value of 477,100 including 287,100 men and 190,000 women. Gents are reduced to 50% in 1861 and women declined to 85% of first value. The patters followed the same at the end almost equal number of men and female employees working.

On the other side, Secondly even though the employees are greatly dropped, more number of factories are constructed more up to 1881 and then fall. From the data it is clear as the technology and advancement in machines increase, labour cost and employee count fallen. In the end 1901, on an average 1000 employees are working in each factory from 1881 to 1901, the factories are decreased by 120%

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , female
...ata has information about number of male,female employees and the total number of facto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03076923077 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49847290638 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1433233043 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34327430796 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130449233188 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113881017265 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2223891692 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127753065423 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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