The table below gives the average time spent and distance traveled by UK commuters in one year. Time and distance are given in minutes and miles accordingly.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The table shows the information of average measurement in terms of time and distance by UK commuters in a year. Overall, from various of regions in the UK, South East was known to be the region who spent the most in time and traveled the most accordingly from the distance.
Like stated previously, South East’s commuters spent 78 minutes and 20 miles, make it the only region with high number. Followed by London and Scotland, which had similar number by a narrow margin, which were 54 and 45 minutes respectively. The latter traveled more than the former region with difference of 5 miles. The remaining regions were known to have similar in terms of time, however, each regions had different measurement of distance.
West Midlands spent 39 minutes and 18 miles. Moreover, three regions of North West, Northern Island, Yorkshire & Humberside had the same minutes spent of 36 and different miles, 18, 15, and 14 miles accordingly. However, North East had a bizzare measurement. It spent 32 minutes and diversely, traveled with more than half the amount of minutes miles. Lastly, commuters in Wales only spent 27 minutes and 14 miles, make it the region with lowest number spent and traveled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the lowest'.
Suggestion: with the lowest
...inutes and 14 miles, make it the region with lowest number spent and traveled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97512437811 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60843646465 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52736318408 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4739903556 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218648786867 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964243437932 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979004694586 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169346930848 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886418317652 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.