The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table shows the information related to the hour of free time per year between teens ages and other ages from the 20s to 70s+ in Someland spend enjoying six activities.
It is clear that watching TV or videos is common with almost every generation living in Someland while going to the cinema is mostly not popular for them.
Looking at the table, as can be seen, the teenagers and the 70s all spend much of their leisure time watching TV, even more than one thousand each year to relax with it while it just takes from 400 to 700 for the rest ages. Compared to the older people who have fewer friends when they grow up, the young people have many friends and they contact socializing with 4 or more people for as much as 350 hours whereas the others only use 25 to 50. However, the adults in their thirties spend the highest time socializing with 4 or fewer friends. People in their 30s and 40s use higher leisure time to do individual exercise than teenagers and 70s only spend 150 hours. Nevertheless, the sport with the group is loved by teenagers more than the other ages. Moreover, almost all people in that place do not like to choose to reduce stress by watching the cinema, and it only attracts teenagers, so they spend 100 hours per year participating in this activity.
- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefits that it will replace face to face education soon Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable What is your opinion 78
- The figures give information about the percentage of households with internet access computer ownership and the percentage of individuals using the Internet in different world regions in 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main f 78
- The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26676673407 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2131394657 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.625 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175788323621 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745965084999 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458499370109 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115079964179 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484417662567 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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