The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

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The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.
Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

The table chart reveals the specific number of hours of the relaxation activities from different age groups in Someland over a year.

It is provided that the amount of leisure time available varies considerably across the age levels. While watching TV or videos is the most popular form of entertainment for all Someland inhabitants, the amount of time for teamwork activities or sports seems to decrease as they become older.

Teenagers and people in their twenties spend around 500 and 350 hours per year on interacting with a group of more than 4 people. Although the total hours of mingling in their 30s, 40s, 50s and 60s are fairly constant (between 300-350), socialising with more than 4 people drops dramatically to 50 hours in the 30s and 40s age groups.

In a year, teenagers and retired people spend around twice as much time for using their TV as those who are at working age. Home entertainment ranges from just over a thousand hours for the youngest and oldest people and an average of approximately 600 hours for everyone else. The statistic of the hours allocating by Somelanders for enjoying cinema follows a similar pattern.

According to the given figures, teenagers and young adults like attending exercise and sport activities on a group while it is avoided by people who are above 60 years old. Teens spend the greatest time with 450 hours per year for this way of entertainment and it is reduced when they grow up.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86639676113 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65451234161 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5440298749 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242313021564 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102115383521 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296312746521 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134811135968 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308831181148 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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