The table below gives information about bakery s average sales in three different branches in 2015

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The table below gives information about bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015.

The table compares the average sale of a Bakery in three different branches in 2005. Overall, it is readily apparent that the branch in Vancouver Georgia Street had a better sale in comparison to its counterparts. Additionally, all branches also reported that they had different most popular items chosen by their consumers.
To begin with, the number of transactions in the Vancouver Georgia Street branch was 854, followed by Vancouver Dunsmuir Street (750) and Vancouver Drake Street (390). In terms of transaction value, the branch in Vancouver Georgia Street has also dominated the others with 10.60 US dollars of transaction value, followed closely by the branch in Vancouver Drake Street (9,02 US dollars) and Vancouver Dunsmuir Street was the least (5,61 US dollars).
Moving to the number of Eat-in transactions, the Vancouver Georgia Street branch accounted for the highest figure for this category (405 transactions), and 358 transactions were recorded in the Vancouver Dunsmuir Street branch. Meanwhile, Vancouver Drake Street brach only sold 200 Eat-in transactions. Similarly, the branch in Vancouver Georgia Street also recorded the biggest Take-away transaction among other branches (449). The branches in Vancouver Dunsmuir Street and Vancouver Drake Street had only 392 and 190 Take-away transactions. In addition, these branches also had different top most popular items.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54502369668 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83228395358 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473933649289 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.928162808 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140356086114 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101997374488 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140889583055 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142426742162 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120106812461 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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