The bar chart compares the earnings of persons with distinct educational background.
It is clear that the more educated the individuals are, the more salary they earn in average, while the Ph. D holders gain around 20 thousand dollars more than those with a high school diploma. Also, it is worth noticing that the gap of earnings between the higher levels of education becomes gradually smaller.
Looking in the details, in terms of making money, acquiring a high school diploma means getting roughly 30,000$. On the other hand, Ph. D holders receive almost 50,000$ as an average salary, which is quite 40% more dollars than the formers.
Between high school diploma and Ph. D professionals, there are two other categories of education levels namely bachelor’s degree and master’s degree. In fact, obtaining a baccalaureate is related to earning as a wage 10 thousand dollars more than obtaining a high school diploma and around 10 thousand dollars less than completing a master. In specific, holders of bachelors earn approximately 40,000 $, whereas holders of masters receive more or less 50,000$, likewise the Ph. D professionals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...school diploma means getting roughly 30,000$. On the other hand, Ph. D holders recei...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...r hand, Ph. D holders receive almost 50,000$ as an average salary, which is quite 40...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ders of bachelors earn approximately 40,000 $, whereas holders of masters receive mor...
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Line 7, column 456, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ders of masters receive more or less 50,000$, likewise the Ph. D professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, look, so, whereas, while, in fact, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28415300546 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81984574214 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8030637655 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0218831709892 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.011371488207 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0165511170805 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.016467963974 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211558147083 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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