The table below gives information about favorite pastime in different countries in percentage?
The tabular chart reveals the information about the seven pastimes activities which are performed by 30-50 years old in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that Japan is only one nation who performed an activity that is reading, and as well as Japan has liked reading. That is 62%.
It is crystal clear from the table, Canada is participated in seven activities but it has highest percentage in telivision. In addition to this, England has attended in four activities but it has been least percentage in music. However, in France reading, hobbies and music has 30,20 and 4 percentage respectively.
As far as, trend is concerned that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are participated in all activities. Moreover, Australia has highest percentage in telivision as compare to other activities, Australia either or Korea has same percentage in hobbies that is 45. Furthermore, in Korea nation music, beach and sleep activities has 2,2 and 4 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
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Suggestion: been the least
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
... in all activities. Moreover, Australia has highest percentage in telivision as compare to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03186029869 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1003836298 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124903524468 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424206895492 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556043233182 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690828453766 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531407061875 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.