The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Thien on Thu, 01/05/2017 - 03:45

The table compares the percentage of people aged 30-50 doing in seven favourite pastimes in eight countries. Overall, it is clear that most people are in their 30-50 years old in all mentioned nations read books in their spare time. Also, the favourite pastime of Japanese is only reading books.

To begin, Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching TV with 60 percent. The percentage of Chineses do the same activity is lower, only 15%. The highest percentage of Japanese, Koreans, Chineses and France enjoy reading books, with 62%, 60% and 30% compared with other pastime activity whereas only 15% people in other countries doing the same way. Interestingly, 20% of people in England like sleeping whereas there is a minor percent of 2 to 5% people in other countries like doing the same way. On the other hand, about 50% Chineses are interested in doing hobbies but only 5% like going to the Beach and 0% listen to music. These figures are different to the number of Australian and American, with 30% people going to the beach and 23% of Americans listen to music in the pastime. The last but not the least, approximately 20-30% people in mentioned countries except France, England and Japan prefer playing the sport. It seems that the pastimes of people of different nationalities are influenced by the number of factors such as socio-economic and climate.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9652173913 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63370619424 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7370118226 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.818181818 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0540363969465 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264268755519 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319063409192 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507783958485 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153524412177 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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