The above-given table provides information about the most liked pastimes in various countries for the age group 30-50 years. It distinguishes between the following countries- Canada, France, Australia, England, Korea, China, USA and Japan.
Overall, The most liked recreational activity is watching television, reading and following their hobbies.
The horizontal row in the table denotes the number of activities, mentioned- watching TV, reading, Sports, Hobbies, Music, Beach and sleeping. For indulging TV, Canada, the USA, and Australia score somewhat in 60. In sports, Australia indulges itself the most while the lowest is Korea. For reading, books, Japan, Korea and China spend a large amount of their time reading books while the lowest in the USA, Canada and Australia. In indulging themselves in hobbies, China is at the top-most at 50 while the lowest in England, 21. Considering music, only the USA spends more time in it. Australia and the USA, believe in having a vacation on the beach. And lastly, the mid-aged people spend less time in sleeping with England having figures of 30 whereas Japan and Canada being the lowest,2.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Thien
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30939226519 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63535332476 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1137608736 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0566682847459 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023207559447 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549893677659 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577178324684 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759405635315 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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