The given tabular chart illustrates the information about favourite pastimes, in eight different types of things, by seven different nations, in the age of 30 to 50 years. The data is given in percentum. It is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that, the influence of reading, is highly reflected on all seven countries. In fact, Japan is participating in reading only, at 62%. neither, other six. The rate of sleep is less likely by the all seven nations.
It can be seen that, the demand of television is only in five countries, and sport is same like last matter. Moving further, the reading likes by all seven countries, and Japan is highly interested in reading at 62%. Moreover, the section of music is most liked in USA in the range of 42%.
Secondly, in the pastime, the beach is less favourable by seven nations. Probing ahead, there is a two nations; Australia, and USA,who participates in beach at 30%. Despite of, the percentage of sleep is very low in all seven countries at less than five percent, but 20% in England.
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem? 61
- In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities to what extend do you agree 83
- In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? 80
- The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Neither
... participating in reading only, at 62%. neither, other six. The rate of sleep is less l...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...last matter. Moving further, the reading likes by all seven countries, and Japan ...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...ere is a two nations; Australia, and USA,who participates in beach at 30%. Despite o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76086956522 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73306350198 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7043809903 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3846153846 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0632642891396 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181816452327 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377206291153 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427818403751 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444203913578 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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