The table below gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 and 2014

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The table below gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The given table illustrates the ownership of five different kinds of vehicles in Australia and compares the percentage of change between 2010 and 2014.
Overall, it is evident that there was a dramatic upward trend in the number of all types of vehicles over five years of the period. It is also notable that while passenger vehicles were the most common, the opposite was true for light trucks.
As can be seen from the table, starting at nearly 2 million in 2010, the figure for passenger vehicles saw a significant increase of nearly 1 million in 2012 before peaking at precisely 13 million two years later. Meanwhile, there were 106000 light trucks registered in 2010, which was over 100 times less than that of the former and then hitting the highest point of 131000 in 2014. We can also see that despite the enormous rise, the proportion of change in the quantity of passenger vehicles was only only over 10% compared to over 23% in that of light trucks.
Out of the rest of given means of transport, commercial vehicles became the most prevalently used ones, standing at over 2 million in 2010 as opposed to only 540000 and 384000 respectively of motorcycles and heavy trucks. During five years of the period, change in the quantity of heavy trucks was 8.3%, which was smaller in comparison with 17.4% and 30.8% of the other two vehicles

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: only
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73617021277 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44455400297 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527659574468 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5718902365 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.125 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205754245239 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961701522457 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742466243165 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146293178172 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757110433098 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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