The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by My on Sat, 08/11/2018 - 01:34

The table below illustrates top 5 most popular languages which is chosen by people around the world as their first or second language.

Overall, Mandarin Chinese is the most effective languages in the world. In addition, the numbers of people who speak Chinese as the mother tongue are obviously outnumber compared with four others.

Looking at the details, the numbers of Chinese native speakers is 900 millions. Furthermore, there are about 190 millions people around the world chose to learn speaking Mandarin Chinese as an additional language. Obviously, the gap between the numbers of populations who communicate by the most famous language and the second well-known language is particularly large. Totally, there are just 490 millions speakers chose Hindi as their first and second communication tool. The numbers of Spanish speaking people are also just 420 millions.

More specifically, English is the only language, which has the amount of nonnative speakers higher than native speakers of 264 millions. By contrast, the numbers people use Portuguese as their main communication tool are much more higher than who speak it as a foreign additional language. The total of people who can speak Arabic register 230 millions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to speak'.
Suggestion: to speak
... people around the world chose to learn speaking Mandarin Chinese as an additional langu...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing people are also just 420 millions. More specifically, English is the only l...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
... their main communication tool are much more higher than who speak it as a foreign addition...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...nication tool are much more higher than who speak it as a foreign additional langua...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38659793814 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74194343478 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6272714984 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932246742711 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403395347776 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038600185356 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708449191979 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330133368509 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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