The table below gives information about the level of weekly consumption by different age groups in milk and butter in one European country

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The table below gives information about the level of weekly consumption, by different age groups in milk and butter in one European country

The table illustrates the weekly consumption of milk and butter in different age groups in a European country. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that over 65 year-old group drinks the most amount of milk; while 45-65 years old is the most butter consumer. Noticeably, the full fat and low fat ratings of butter in 45-65 year-old group shared an equal percentage.
In particular, when it comes to the consumption of milk, over 65 years old dominated the milk consumption market at 1900ml, particularly 30% of full fat and 70% of low fat. Following by roughly 1650ml in 26-45 and 45-65 year-old elements, including 20%, 45% of full fat respectively and the others of low fat. The lowest consumer is below 25 year-old group at 1200ml milk with 59% of full fat.
Meanwhile, in terms of consumption of butter, the age 45-65 ranks the top consumer at 60 grams with an equal percentage of a half. The second top position is over 65 years old at 30 grams with the nearly same rating of full fat and low fat, which is just half in comparison with that of the oldest group. It is accompanied by under 25 and 26-45 year-old elements at 19 grams and 12 grams accordingly, which is the least butter consumers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, second, so, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59523674687 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4752437421 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166543594273 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114051495836 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149271632142 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133681777189 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772435831774 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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