The table below gives information about a restaurants average sales in three different branches in 2016.
The tabular chart illustrates the information regarding that in food Chain average sales in terms of in Vancouver: Georgia ,dunsmuir and Drake street in one years.
A quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that in Vancouver Georgia Street More popular as opposed to others both Street.
According to charts ,there were five average of transaction: no. Of trans ,value ,eat-in ,take-away transaction. While ,in native of Vancouver more preferred to visited in Georgia Street with no. Of transaction ,just was only at 854 ,whereas the figure for dunsmuir street was minimal which accounted 750 and in Drake street at least two times declined than Georgia.
As far as ,the transaction value in Georgia and Drake street were equally approximately 10.69 dollars and $ 9.02. on the other hand , in dunsmuir at least under $5 , respectively. After that , eat-in and take-away transaction the figure for Georgia and dunsmuir in terms of no more major difference ,which take-away in terms of transaction was 50 more than as compared to eat-in. While ,in Drake Street the figure for in both transaction nearby same more than 190. Finally , in three food chain their of own dish popular with chicken as burger , wings and pasta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, regarding, whereas, while, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03465346535 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66111306488 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569306930693 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3026129308 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493758171718 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02181033312 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359792497219 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414708353033 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458453552671 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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