The table below gives information about a restaurants average sales in three different branches in 2016

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sales in terms of in Vancouver: Georgia ,dunsmuir and Drake street in one years. ...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one year', 'a year', or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: one year; a year; years
...: Georgia ,dunsmuir and Drake street in one years. A quick look on graph is enough to ma...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...others both Street. According to charts ,there were five average of transaction: ...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ive average of transaction: no. Of trans ,value ,eat-in ,take-away transaction. Wh...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...rage of transaction: no. Of trans ,value ,eat-in ,take-away transaction. While ,in...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...transaction: no. Of trans ,value ,eat-in ,take-away transaction. While ,in native ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... ,value ,eat-in ,take-away transaction. While ,in native of Vancouver more preferred ...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ue ,eat-in ,take-away transaction. While ,in native of Vancouver more preferred to...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n Georgia Street with no. Of transaction ,just was only at 854 ,whereas the figure...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...no. Of transaction ,just was only at 854 ,whereas the figure for dunsmuir street w...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... times declined than Georgia. As far as ,the transaction value in Georgia and Dra...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$9'.
Suggestion: $9
...equally approximately 10.69 dollars and $ 9.02. on the other hand , in dunsmuir at ...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...approximately 10.69 dollars and $ 9.02. on the other hand , in dunsmuir at least u...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...69 dollars and $ 9.02. on the other hand , in dunsmuir at least under , respectiv...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other hand , in dunsmuir at least under , respectively. After that , eat-in and ...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...other hand , in dunsmuir at least under , respectively. After that , eat-in and t...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... least under , respectively. After that , eat-in and take-away transaction the fi...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uir in terms of no more major difference ,which take-away in terms of transaction ...
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Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...0 more than as compared to eat-in. While ,in Drake Street the figure for in both t...
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Line 4, column 470, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ction nearby same more than 190. Finally , in three food chain their of own dish p...
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Line 4, column 541, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... own dish popular with chicken as burger , wings and pasta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, regarding, whereas, while, at least, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03465346535 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66111306488 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569306930693 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3026129308 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493758171718 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02181033312 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359792497219 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414708353033 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458453552671 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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