Some people say that too much attention and too much resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about the opinion
It is universal truth, now in this era some animals and birds species are endanger for this reason day by day government more concentrate to protect endanger species. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On the one hand, there are number of reasons government is more worried about wild animals and birds. The main reason for believing this is that it's quite essential authority to must makes a rule and regulation for endanger species like lion, tiger, peacock and so on.moreover, they makes a zoos and parks where more people go to with family member and more money spend to buy ticket, food and so on equipment. Authority should makes a link to big industry so that they collect and deposit funds for wild floral. Besides, the second plus point is that nowadays government more encourage and give money to people for keep pet the species at home.
On the other hand, I argued that the benefits of opposing case. However, some individual illegal way to catch animals and birds afterwards with sell and smuggling in market and give to firms just only for money then they use for different purpose and making a cosmetic, clothes, shoes and so on products. Furthermore, nowadays scientists using to wild animals and birds making a medicine with also doing to research and reveals who species more helpful for medical treatment. People have often this opinion that more species like dog, cat, cow and so on flora ordinary to see in highway, street, and road which leads to more remains the accident with more block to the roads and government no focus towards local species.
In conclude, I pen down to say that there is no doubt people more contribute to protect animals and birds. But, sometimes people using to flora complete to own needed such as eggs, meat non vegetarian food more selling in market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endangered'.
Suggestion: endangered
... era some animals and birds species are endanger for this reason day by day government m...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...tiger, peacock and so on.moreover, they makes a zoos and parks where more people go t...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...d and so on equipment. Authority should makes a link to big industry so that they col...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a species'.
Suggestion: who is a species
...with also doing to research and reveals who species more helpful for medical treatment. Peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.753894081 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36438542056 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8668401187 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109149769699 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517867240845 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530583071693 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761095899704 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275730750937 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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