The crime rates nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.
There is no any doubt that in present scenario crime ratio has reduce as compare to early years. Because , government more public tax fund to spend on security and use to technology for decline the criminals activity. I agree with this statement and discuss both point of view.
On the one hand ,there are number of stunning benefits of decreasing crime rates. These include enchanced footprint machine ,lie detective ,high tech cameras. Firstly , government and private firms installed the CCTV camera around the society ,with the helpful for copes to catch the criminals easily and sometimes prevent the crime. Moreover ,law enforcement and authority a makes the strictly rules and regulation for this reason people more scared to doing the violence in public spot. For instance ,in the global more nations but ,the one of the country in Dubai inside 0 percent crime rates. Thus ,where if individual try to steal the car then ,automatic sensor on car slow and lock the gate.
On the other hand ,there are couple of drawbacks of the technology. Secondly ,people more depends on technology for this reason who culprit find out the new way to do the crime by through computer ,cellphone. Additionally ,they mind machine through hack the websites ,with to steal the significant information and data which sell to others person. Furthermore , lawbreaker cell phone along with sit at home to do the ease fraud with hide to own original identity after that online withdrawal the money from bank without any trouble.
In conclude ,it can be seen that whereas the technology has brought some disadvantages in terms of waste money ,hacking ,cyber crime ,it's advantage such as people feel more secure in moder era than formal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00699300699 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49965455402 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678321678322 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1195037625 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166241605383 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513571395021 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530708091219 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960129046483 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192725027615 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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