The table below gives information about the underground railwaysystems in six cities

The table chart depicts an information about six various cities that had an underground railway system, which opened in different years.

Overall, in the opening year maximum kilometres covers by London underground railways system, and it is also the oldest underground railways system. However, the minimum distance covers by Kyoto underground railway system. Maximum passengers travel by that railway which was constructed in Tokyo city. The latest underground railway system is manufactured in Los Angeles.

In 1968, an underground railway system builds in London, which covers 394 kilometres of route, and each year 776 million individuals travel by this railway. Paris underground railway system was constructed in 1900, and it covers 199 kilometres of the route each year. After 27 years, the underground railway system build in Tokyo city, which covers 155 kilometres. Along with 1927 million and 1191 million travellers travel by Paris and Tokyo underground railway system.

There is only a 5 million difference between the numbers of passengers who travel by Kyoto and the Los Angeles underground railway system. Kyoto railway system build in 1981, which covers just 11 kilometres of route , but in 2001, railway system build in Los Angeles and it is covers 28 kilometres.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...which covers just 11 kilometres of route , but in 2001, railway system build in Lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74495245696 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2069752724 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11867498081 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066912017879 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772827118024 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115609770043 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108006122946 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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