The given table illustrates the details of the metro system of six different capitals. On the whole, the underground system in London is the oldest, whilst having the most routes among the six cities, while it has the lesser number passengers annually compared to Paris and Tokyo.
In terms of statistics of passengers, Tokyo has the maximum number of passengers per year, with nearly 1930 million people. This number even surpasses that of London(775 million) by over twofold. There are over 1190 million passengers taking the underground in Paris, although it has merely 199 kilometers of route with comparison to London, which has almost 395 kilometers.
Equally importantly, Los Angles observes the penultimate number of passengers, standing at 50 million. Furthermore, Los angles possess the newest underground system in terms of the open date, opening in 2001. It is worth noting that the least number falls into Kyoto as regard to route and passengers per year, with 11 kilometers and 45 million, respectively.
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- Topic 1: Some students prefer to take a gap year and between high school university to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. 84
- The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Write an essay based on this task 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26993865031 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7692982431 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2969429861 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903247383168 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427666401752 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476144923504 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712318597457 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576192506119 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.