The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Submitted by ankit5908 on Tue, 07/23/2019 - 19:45

The table provides data on the underground railway of six different nations with respect to the year it was opened, kilometres of route and number of passengers travelling in millions each year.

Overall London underground rail is oldest and has longest route, whereas underground rail of Los Angeles and Kyoto is newest and has shortest route respectively. Furthermore while Tokyo appears to be the busiest underground rail, Kyoto has least number of passengers.

The London underground railway was opened in 1863 and now carries 775 million commuters per year over 394 kilometres of distance. In 1900, underground railway was built in Paris with 199 kilometres of existing route accommodating 1191 million travellers, which is second highest among all. Following this and underground railway network of 155 kilometres where built in Tokyo in 1927. This is used by 1927 million people each year making it the most used underground railway.

On the other hand, after 50 years the Washington DC inaugurated its underground rail in 1981 which has 126 kilometres of track and is used by 144 million passengers each year. Kyoto and Los Angeles underground railway system were opened later in 1981 and 2001 respectively, with annual passengers numbering at and below 50 millions respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the longest'.
Suggestion: has the longest
...l London underground rail is oldest and has longest route, whereas underground rail of Los ...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the shortest'.
Suggestion: has the shortest
... of Los Angeles and Kyoto is newest and has shortest route respectively. Furthermore while T...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...st and has shortest route respectively. Furthermore while Tokyo appears to be the busiest u...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the least'.
Suggestion: has the least
... be the busiest underground rail, Kyoto has least number of passengers. The London und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, whereas, while, with respect to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32682926829 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89848059645 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.08255281 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136120621832 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679349794156 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305365096483 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086796229577 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244615444026 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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