The first pie chart illustrates the proportion of students and ruling in various courses in Northwest University, whereas the second pie chart compares the ethnicity of overseas students in arts in this US based University.
Overall, it is evident that art is the most popular faculty among students, whereas medicine is the least preferred. Furthermore, while South American students makes the highest number of foreign students in arts, the lowest number are from Africa.
In terms of subject preference, arts, computing and science comprises of almost two third of all enrollments in the university with a proportion of 23%, 22% and 21% respectively. Around 14% opt for business study placing it in fourth position. On the other hand, engineering, law and medicine provides less than 10% of admission with medicine being the lowest at 5%.
With regards to composition of overseas students in the faculty of Arts, 79 students are from South America making it the highest. European students joining art as a subject of interest are 21 in number which places them second in the majority. Arts students from Asia, Australia and Africa are fewer in number with African being the least of all.
- Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 103 - Quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 73
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. 84
- UK Telephone Call, by category, 1995-2002 78
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...preference, arts, computing and science comprises of almost two third of all enrollments in ...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: fewer
...nts from Asia, Australia and Africa are fewer in number with African being the least of all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, second, so, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71211759591 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9909551211 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158326005222 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606724301263 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688488264855 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101462397289 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798888381182 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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