It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.
The London underground is the oldest system, having opened in 1863. It is also the largest system, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more people per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used,with 1927 million passengers per year.
Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with126 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.
- Nowadays most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past what are the main causes of this situation Suggest some possible solution 73
- individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day 61
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older while others think they should stay at home with the family Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Nowadays families move to different countries for work Some people think it has a negative effect on children while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...the Tokyo system is easily the most used,with 1927 million passengers per year. Of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03378378378 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59539507641 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7004555934 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0759966151483 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424876335942 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349048591333 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561124765637 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312109230452 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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